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I’ve never read anything like this before - and I think it’s super cool. It gives me be sci-fi vibes :)

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Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it. ❤️

It is one of my fav as well as I tried to write in a different style and it turned out well.

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Sep 20Liked by Harsh Munjal

So cool, love the ending as well! 😊

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Thanks! I am glad you liked it.

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I love this write up! :)

‘I let go.

BANG’

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Thank for feedback. :)

I loved the way it ended. I contemplated for at least an hour if I should somehow include the word BIG somehow with the Bang. Had a few options. but it felt much more better to Just leave it to the viewers imagination...

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That's a well thought out decision and leaving it upto the readers/viewers/audience in any field of artistic work is so much more engaging, personal and satisfactory for the receivers, for they get a chance to play a part in your story :)

Goodluck with your writing!

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